Black and White Rowboat

I went back to my favorite pond today to reshoot the rowboats. Here's a black and white conversion.
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Hi Marian.  This is a great idea.  I'm looking for something more out of it though... just my thoughts.  As it is, it's almost like the subject and leading lines of the image are keeping me from exploring it further.  I really think that the boat needs to be on the right side of the image, with the negative space on the left of it.  I also think it's claustrophobic and could be improved by simply having more space around it.  My own perception would be more on the bottom with the water reflections and ripples; but you know the scene better and your own interpretation of it, so take that for what it's worth.

One other note, there are a lot of middle grey tones, making it appear 'muddy'.  I can see you have pure whites and pure blacks, but you may try some dodging and burning in areas to make the subject matter stand out some more.  The tall grass on the left of the boat could be made a little more prominent by selecting it and working on it on a separate layer.  As it is, it falls into the background and gets lost, making at appear as though there is just a strange break in the boat.

One other note, there is no rule that says we can't spot and retouch nature.  There are a couple bright leaves in the bushes in the back, a couple bright grasses protruding from the water that touch the left side of the image and create a stopping point, and a spot or two in the water could maybe help also.  These things are all up to you to a certain extent, but I've posted my own 'vision' of what the image could be with about ten minutes refinement on it.  See what you think, hopefully something can help you.

Travis
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And just for kicks and giggles... I took the right side of the image and made it the left side to see if moving the subject to the other side of the frame would help.  See what you think.
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I believe I have seen you shoot this rowboat before in a group and they were pastel in color and I loved it!  So as a black and white picture I think it's lacking something, but it is probably just like Travis said about the muddy black and whites.  I want there to be more pop in contrast, which can, unfortunately, make a picture look less old and weathered sometimes which is what I think you were going for.

As for the composition.  I agree with Travis about the need for more space.  I am not so sure I like the space on the left side though because it pushes the boat and it's reflection to the right making an arrow that points to the edge of the picture leading your eye right out of it.  Maybe moving the boat up or down in the frame to give more weight to either the water or the grass and greenery behind it?  I am not sure as I don't know what you had to work with.

Marian, I know you like to get creative with editing and a lot of times I feel people do this to hide the flaws of a bad image (I am not saying you do that, because I don't believe you do), but this is a good solid image, it's just lacking a little personality and I would like to see you inject a little interest into the picture.  I can't tell you how to go about doing that because you are the artist and I trust your vision.
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Thank you both! Now I can't wait to get home and play with it some more. I tried adjusting curves and also levels, but each time I did it, it blew out the highlights on the slats of the boat. I'll play with the composition (this was a crop, so there is room to work) and do some retouching to see what I can get. Smiley
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Is this more of a composition you were thinking of, Travis and Susie?
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I absolutely prefer it!  I love it more in color as well.  Gorgeous.

Travis
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Thanks, Travis. The problem with this one was that I hadn't noticed my exposure compensation had been bumped as I was hiking. So it's at Exposure Compensation:-15/10 Step which made this image really, really dark. Unfortunately, since I had my eyes lasered, I haven't been chimping as much as I used to, mainly because I have to put on reading glasses to do so. But I was able to save this image to some extent. Smiley

Here's the original, without any adjustment except for size:
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Well, it looks like you made lemonade from your lemons.  I have been making a conscious effort to not chimp as well.  I've decided that it can cause a lack of confidence from a client if their "professional photographer" has to continually 'check' to make sure everything's OK Smiley.  It keep them from wanting to look at the back of my camera as well.

Sorry, I'm getting off topic.  It really is pretty amazing that you were able to save as much as you were in that image.  Is it too deteriorated to print?

Travis
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That's the original?  Wow.

I like that composition a bit better, I still see that arrow pointing out, but with more room around it on all sides it's not a problem.  I like the color too.

Chimping is my friend Smiley  I don't bother trying not to, it's useful and my clients don't seem to notice, I guess... or I am oblivious to what they think.  I don't do it after each shot, usually after the first one after changing the light or location or something.  It has saved me from accidently leaving the ISO or something in the wrong setting, then I can adjust it quickly before shooting a whole series ruined.
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