Reply #7 - November 14, 2007, 11:21:02 AM
Susie,
On this monitor, these all look a little red. However, this one is not calibrated and, even if they are, it can be corrected in printing.
First off . . . she is a stunning woman, with a great look that we would all love to photograph! I almost cring when I get a bride who looks like this becuase people think "anyone could photograph her!" Now, we all know that is nonsense, but there you go.
Tiny little suggestions, if I may . . .
Number 21: Move her right elbow out away from here body a little. This will provide more of a "base" for her body.
Number 28: Is incredible! I love this image. I have a weak spot for single flowers . . .
Number 19: Has her arm extended the way that I suggested for 21. You can how this is better than if her arm were vertical.
Number 29: Although I wouldn't worry too much about the railing sticking out of her side, you can always move her to the right and have the bridge next to her instead of behind her.
In all this is a great sequence!
Ed
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