Entrance to Snow Canyon

Susie, I won't argue that it's right or wrong.  I'll let you guys decide if you like it or not and go from there.  I will tell you that it was intentional to have the light values the way they are, and it was naturally this way (not done in Photoshop).  I waited for the light to filter through the clouds in this particular 'lighting pattern'.  I wanted focus on the entrance of the park between the two formations on the sides, then for some visual interest throughout the landscape.  I was hoping the bright area around the outside, and then the dark, and then the brighter area again were acting somewhat like a compositional 'target'.  This may be far-fetched, so feel free to tell me what you think.  Does your eye go to the entrance first, then naturally move about and take in the rest of the image?  Do you immediately get out of it, or does it hold your interest at all?  And most importantly to me, do you enjoy looking at it?  To me, this is what landscape photography is about.  The entire scene is the subject, but there needs to be a focal point and a reason for the viewer to keep discovering new things within it.

What do you think?  Keep the comments coming.  I'm learning a lot today.

Travis

What we need to see is an entrance for the eye and to travel in the image and stay inside the landscape.
Would I say maybe the lighting is flat? Possibly, time of day is a factor to capturing canyons, one would need to spend the day from early morning to evening to see the light play inside the walls and valleys and surrounding areas.
Color also plays a vital role in landscapes or B/W depth.

With Dodge and burn, USING CURVES in layers, you can bring out depth and brightness in the scene. 
There is potential.

My eyes go first to the crumbly ground in the foreground. Like the other one you recently posted, I think you're including too much foreground. If it had really great cracked earth, for instance, that would be great, but the foreground here doesn't add too much to the scene. That said, I think the rest of this photo is great and I like the darkness caused by the clouds.