Reply #14 - June 09, 2008, 03:42:18 PM
It's a good effort, however, the image is flat, "Colors"
I agree with Susie about the font, omit it, the capture tells the story.
leave the font alone, drop the text to be all "in the grass" then make the letters the same color as the swift's chest.
see if that looks better [shrug]
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I'd love to hear ideas as to an alternate wording, though, and what type of font you all think would work better for this. This is going in a school as a poster to promote environmental awareness. 
