Reply #5 - October 01, 2008, 07:44:57 PM
Great family group shots. A couple suggestions if I may. On the first one, either position yourself slightly to the right or crop some off the right side of the image. I think the brightness of the foliage and the very distinct line of light and shadow could be improved. I like the line for its compositional value, but there is too much bright area, I think.
In the second one, I think if you were to have them wear shoes/sandals or reposition them so they aren't standing barefoot in rocks you will probably get some more natural and relaxed expressions.
What I like most about both of these is that you have used a circular composition of their faces instead of the traditional triangle. Many people tout the triangle for its strength in the base; and although I don't disagree with that, it's the safe way. A circle is more difficult to get right, and it symbolizes love. Perfect for a family group photograph. One thing to watch out for though is the heads overlapping and any heads that are horizontal or vertical of each other. You can have a circle and move things just slightly so it is more dynamic and the viewer will enjoy the viewing experience a little more. Often you can do this by simply changing which leg a person's weight is on, or having them lean slightly forward or move back just a touch. This can be a game of inches to maneuver people and yet not lose the original idea that you start with. It will take some trial and error. Look at some of Hanson Fong's group shots and really study them. Better yet, find a chance to listen to him speak. It'll be well worth it.
Travis
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