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torie

May 09, 2011, 03:43:48 PM

These are my horses

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BobEdens

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Reply #1 - May 09, 2011, 11:35:54 PM

OK that first one is just creepy.

second one is technically perfect but I'm not sure what the story is. Its the why did you take that shot that I wonder about.

please remember My opinions mean very little. [grin]

but then again, if I think your work is creepy its not necessarily a bad thing. I love creepy...

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Marian Murdoch

Reply #2 - May 09, 2011, 11:38:57 PM

You might want to re-edit that first one and make his eyelashes white again. They ended up blue when you gave the eye the color treatment. Wink

Oooo, and make the two leaves he has in his mouth green!

Beautiful horses, you lucky duck!

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torie

Reply #3 - May 10, 2011, 03:51:34 PM

Quote from: Marian Murdoch on May 09, 2011, 11:38:57 PM

You might want to re-edit that first one and make his eyelashes white again. They ended up blue when you gave the eye the color treatment. Wink

Oooo, and make the two leaves he has in his mouth green!

Beautiful horses, you lucky duck!

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BobEdens

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Reply #4 - May 10, 2011, 05:54:30 PM

Much better.

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Marian Murdoch

Reply #5 - May 10, 2011, 06:24:06 PM

That's it! Now the viewer's eye flows instead of just staying stuck on the horse's eye.

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