Wedding Details

So for my online preview galleries I need a front page image and I usually do a montage of sorts.  This couple mentioned in their consultation that they loved shots of details from weddings.  So this is what I did.  I kinda threw it together in 10 minutes, and I am not in love with the bouquet picture on the right side where it is because of the distracting brown areas, but I also was torn thinking the whole thing was becoming too busy... anyway, here it is:
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Agree about the bouquet, but for a different reason. The left side is getting cut off.  What about making that segment a little wider to get the entire bouquet on page?  You could then extend the jellybeans to the right into the bouquet section blocking out the brown.  Nothing says that every segment has to be a rectangle. 
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oooh yeah, good ideas.  You are right about the shapes.
And the jellybeans are really watermelon, not that it matters, I just thought you meant the purple M&M's for a second.

Looking at it again the right side is cooler than the left, which is warmer.  Make sense?
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