Night shot w/ a lot of lights....

*Night" shots are best made at twilight while the sky is deep blue rather than black. Experienced photographers call that "the magic hour".  If you set your white balance for tungsten you will get a warm glow in street lights, illuminated signs, traffic lights, and light coming from the inside of buildings.The sky will register as a rich magical blue- if there is a tiny bit of sunset left the colors can be outstanding.  I usually set up near the end of sunset and shoot until the sky begins to turn black.

If yo stop the lens down (to a small aperture) and use a ling exposure, you will get some interesting star-like effect from point light sources such as streetlights in the distance.

I hope this helps!   Ed 

What time do they turn the lights on?  I've done a few night shots where right after the daylight savings switch, before the city has reset all of the clock that control when lights come on, there's a few minutes when it's dark enough to get a night type shot but the city lights aren't on. 

It does look overprocessed, although that's a tough call to make on a web sized image. 

And I think it would look better in a different proportion.  At roughly 4x6 it has a snapshot type feel.  Something a little more panoramic might make a stronger image.