Reply #8 - June 22, 2008, 06:47:25 PM
I'm not sure if it's the way this image looks on your monitor, but the couch on my monitor looks like a big black blob. I can see the little metal piece and a couple of curved highlights, but that's it. I would much more prefer to see more definition in the couch, so it doesn't look like she's hanging onto a black hole.
Also, in most portraits by you, your catchlights look too bright, like they've been added in post processing. While this is fine if it works for you, it makes it harder for me to understand where your light is coming from.

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