Merchant Stairs

Liking this place more and more, everyone's so friendly and nice and really helpful.

Same place, same time, but I hadn't gone all the way to the river at the time. This was taken just before I started to go for the shots of the "river". As you can see, it hasn't been used in ages... I liked it better in B+W than in color, too. =)

Taken in RAW format as well. I tried to increase the resolution to 300 but it was lower and I wasn't sure if it would be a good move as the picture would've got bigger.
Attachments
 merchantstairsorpaf2.jpg - 165.08 KB - 65 views

Logged

I'm deaf but use a cochlear implant to hear.

Visit my dA! Please watch and comment (criticise, too, if you please!)

http://shoggard3.deviantart.com/

http://www.wix.com/shoggard3/shoggardphotography

Liking this place more and more, everyone's so friendly and nice and really helpful.

Same place, same time, but I hadn't gone all the way to the river at the time. This was taken just before I started to go for the shots of the "river". As you can see, it hasn't been used in ages... I liked it better in B+W than in color, too. =)

Taken in RAW format as well. I tried to increase the resolution to 300 but it was lower and I wasn't sure if it would be a good move as the picture would've got bigger.

This is an interesting location with lots of textures and tones to work with.  One of the problems you may have experienced is very high scene contrast because of the time of day.  The major problem with the image is that there are too many highlights- all over the place and it it is hard to find the motif of the image- the main subject.  I had to look real hard to define the image. 

This problem is sometimes caused by light filtering through the trees.  Midday sunlight is oftentimes difficult to control and because it is comming from directly above the area you are photographing, it lacks the direction of light that brings out textures and dimensionality. Sometimes shootin earlier or later in the day of workin on a day when it is cloudy or mildly overcast bring out more detail and texture and allows you to frame you main subject bu using you compositional skills.

I hope this helps.  Ed Shapiro
Logged

Ed Shapiro
The Hintonburg Studio
Suite 201  78 Hinton Avenue North
Ottawa, Ontario CANADA  K1Y 0Z8
613-792-4837    Email:  edshapiro@rogers.com

I am glad you figured out how to attach the image, the size is just fine too.

I like the area, I would love to use it for portraits... but that's the type of photography I do.
I like the point of view down the path. I agree with Ed though about the contrast between the highlights and the shadows. The dark parts are very dark. It's such a hard balance to find interesting light that won't be too contrasty.

Just so you know, by posting in this section of the forum you are not opening your image to everyone's comments. Only a few people here can critique your image. While it's nice to see what working pros have to say, everyone on this board has valid insight and are very helpful.
Logged


Sidney,

I think that you have a good location here and some good ideas for working with it.  The first problem that I have with the image is that I have never had sucess shooting DOWN steps when the steps are a primary (or the primary) element of the image.  In most cases, shooting down like this will "flatten" the image visually and you lose perspective of what you are looking at.  On first glance, this appears to be a bridge, not stairs.  Looking at the river, trees and reflections beyond make me think that there is more image here than you have captured.  You are sort of stuck in a middle place.  You can't bring out the texture of the wood used here, but you can't see it in the larger setting either . . .

Keep working and keep posting!

Ed
Logged

Ed Farmer
Mount Laurel, New Jersey

www.edfarmerphotography.com
www.photoartsforum.com