Reply #1 - March 10, 2011, 08:26:06 AM
Hi Torie! Sorry the board is so slow at the moment. A lot of us work full time jobs and usually get on during the weekends.
It's hard to tell the detail that you captured in such a small image, but I'm really liking the knotty boards. I'd love to see this where there is more light on the front of the building. What time of day did you shoot this, the shadows seem pretty harsh. Are you able to get closer? There looks to be tons of potential from this location!
I'm not thrilled with your sepia coloring, as it fades strangely in the sky to pink. Maybe back out some of the red might help.
Also, I think it might have been a better image had you included a bit more sky at the top and the left to give the building some breathing room. The point of the roof leads the eye out of the frame.
Again, welcome to PAF!!! I can't wait to see you grow here with the rest of us.


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