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August 31, 2007, 01:06:44 PM

not the best color when shooting a pale subject, but thats what they wanted.

If anyone see's something I should have done differently, please speak up.

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Benji

Reply #1 - September 04, 2007, 10:46:49 AM

I guess no one wants to comment so I will

The woman at camera left knitted her forehead leaving wrinkles; her face is encroaching into the face of the gal at the rear and you shot into her armpit, a no no as Don Blair used to say!

The beads on thetop of the gal at camera right are not centered like they should be, and you lopped off her right hand.

Benji

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Ginnypenny

Reply #2 - September 04, 2007, 11:26:05 AM

I think everyone is just vacationing for labor day.
The only thing I have to say is watch those armpits. If that pose is what they or you really wanted I would have switched the position of the girls since the other one looks like the sleeve things could have covered her armpit.

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Reply #3 - September 04, 2007, 02:52:49 PM

They actually like that one. It didn't seem right to me for some reason, I guess its the armpit.

Thanks for the comments!!

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corfolio23

Reply #4 - September 11, 2007, 11:19:22 PM

Are they mother daughter? Not that it matters, it just seems that the one on the right is wearing distractingly more makeup than the one on the left.

Otherwise, as usual, I agree with Ginney.

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Reply #5 - September 12, 2007, 01:34:00 PM

Quote from: corfolio23 on September 11, 2007, 11:19:22 PM

Are they mother daughter? Not that it matters, it just seems that the one on the right is wearing distractingly more makeup than the one on the left.

Otherwise, as usual, I agree with Ginney.

they are about the same age, its just that the one on the right is so white her makeup shows up more.
They want more photos with those pink costumes so I'm going to try to do it again with the darker girl in the back and change their arm positions and/or my camera angle.

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