Please critique my boudoir images - no nudity

These images are from a practice boudoir session I did for family portrait client.  I would like to start offering boudoir sessions to paying clients, and I am seeking any and and all CC you care to give.  TIA!
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I am running to a meeting right now. I will post a critique tomorrow. I just wanted to give you a head's up so you don't think I am ignoring you.
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Ok, I have more time now.
First off, I love the natural colors. The skin looks great. It is also smooth and pretty and not overdone with editing. I like the natural posing, especially on the first one.
The second one is well done with the pose and crop. In this situation with this client it's not really a problem, but be aware that lingerie or bras that give a little more support when your client is lying on their back is helpful. If they are wearing an outfit where they need a little lift you can have her put one arm across body just under her breasts to push them together. I'm sorry that was a little graphic, I couldn't think of the best way to explain it.

Are you using studio lights or natural light?
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Thank-you for your critique.  I will keep in mind what you wrote about "support" and body positioning Smiley

I did use studio lighting for this shoot, as I was in a fairly dark room.  I used a large softbox and tried to keep it as natural looking as possible.
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