Pyramid Peak Panorama

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This is one of my favorite places I've ever seen.  There aren't a lot of people because there aren't a lot that know it even exists.  There are no paved roads, hotels, restaurants, gas stations, or even developed campgrounds.  4-wheelers, trucks, campers, horses, and tents is all you ever see up here.  It is in southern Utah, but not in any of our national parks.  It is, within the boundaries of the Fish Lake National Forest however.  I don't get to visit very often, and didn't get to go there at all this year... so out of feeling sorry for myself I decided to take a look at some of my photos of the years in the past.  I found a series that I had shot with the intent of making a panorama, but had never completed.  So, here it is.  This is 5 images stitched together with PhotoMerge.
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Now that's what a pano is supposed to look like!
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-John
Sarcasm, frustrating the clueless since 3000 b.c.

Thanks, John.
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Oooo...very nice! And fantastic job stitching them together. Smiley I love out of the way type places like that. You truly get the feel of how the early pioneers felt when they crossed this beautiful country of ours.
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Comments and Harsh Critiques gladly accepted. My photos are ok to edit.

My photos and art: http://wildmaven.org

Hey, I know where that's at!  I have never seen it this gorgeous though, great capture, and beautiful job.   Clapping
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You do?!  That actually surprises me.  I don't mean that in a mean way, honestly.

It's along one of the most popular ATV trail systems in the state.  This section of the trail is not one of the more popular sections though, for some reason.  I actually like it this way.  The deer grow so big its unbelievable, and there are soooo many of them.  The elk and mountain lions are about the same way.  Wildlife flourishes here because there are so few people.  It's not so remote you have to backpack to it, but it's one of Utah's lesser known gems for sure, in my opinion.
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I know of a lot of places in Utah, I grew up in a family that camps, goes four wheeling, has "dune buggies", fishes, hunts and hikes, believe it or not.  I have have seen a few really cool indian ruines that you have to get to by repelling and only a few people know about them.  My uncle works for the museum in Price and got us on to the digging site when they discovered the mammoth.  Seriously cool stuff.... if you are into it.  I am not so much.  But I do believe Utah has some of the most gorgeous landscapes and rock formations in the world... if you don't mind being sweaty in the sun, being bit my mosquitos and dehydrating... Smiley
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if you don't mind being sweaty in the sun, being bit my mosquitos and dehydrating...

Sounds like home minus the hurricanes and humidity.
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-John
Sarcasm, frustrating the clueless since 3000 b.c.

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if you don't mind being sweaty in the sun, being bit my mosquitos and dehydrating...

Sounds like home minus the hurricanes and humidity.

Sorry son, you have no idea what humidity is...

Travis, good job!! you need to print some of these and sell them!!!
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"I get up every morning determined to both change the world and have one heck of a good time. Sometimes this makes planning my day difficult. "- EB White

Chattanooga Photographer www.BobEdens.com

Beautiful view, now this is an example of panoramic, excellent work
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Thanks again for the kind words, everyone.  I am getting more and more confident that some of my landscapes just might sell.  Maybe some day I'll have to give it a shot... Smiley, thanks for the encouragement, Bob.

Travis
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Well, here's another of the same location.  This is not a panorama, but I just got done editing it for competition and thought I'd post it and see what you guys thought of it.  This is my last selection of the four prints I can enter, so we'll see how it does.

Feel free to critique it as well.
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Travis, I looooooooooove this last shot would purchase it for my home. Smiley However, I think the black border competes with the image. Try putting a thinner border around it:
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Sorry about the border, that's competition ready as it was displayed.  If you haven't done any professional print competition, there are 12 elements that are used to determine a total score.  One of the elements is print presentation.  Typically, if the image is too large in the 'mat' it will lose a little of its score in this area.  It's somewhat difficult to tell how the presentation is being judged, but after some conversations with some Master photographers in the years I've competed, I've learned that prints will often do better when presented as a somewhat smaller image inside of a larger 'mat'.

So, the short answer is that I agree with you, if the image were for display, gallery exhibits, or for sale.  However, this image was posted "comp-ready" instead (sorry for the confusion).  Honestly, if I were to sell it or display it, I would probably do something different also, as you have noted.  In this particular case, I think I'll leave it for competition.

I don't normally post images ready for competition, because I do things a little differently when they're for competition.  Judges are tough to please, and even more difficult to out-guess.  You aren't presenting images for sale, nor can you impress them, so you kind of have to learn to play by their rules and learn what you can and apply that to your everyday work.  I think competition is great, I've learned a lot from doing it.  But it is a little different than what I would typically do for any other purpose.
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your comp ready image needs a couple of things.

the mat needs to be the same all around.

a white tmining logo in the corner of the mat would add to it.
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"I get up every morning determined to both change the world and have one heck of a good time. Sometimes this makes planning my day difficult. "- EB White

Chattanooga Photographer www.BobEdens.com

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