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The Harley Gal

September 21, 2007, 02:53:36 PM

A high school senior girl. He dad just placed an order and I couldn't resist sharing these two.

Benji

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BobEdens

Reply #1 - September 21, 2007, 07:46:45 PM

both done very well. because of the cross, I like the second one better. (doesn't fit)

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Ryan Nutt

Reply #2 - September 22, 2007, 10:35:01 AM

They both look very good, but the Harley image doesn't seem to fit her. I'd imagine it was her idea though.

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Travis Minnig

Reply #3 - September 23, 2007, 10:16:43 PM

Ben,

I love them both. I wonder if just a touch more separation on the hat would be nice to keep it from falling off into the black background.... I like the second one better, but not for any really apparent reason; I just seem to be drawn to it more. My favorite thing about both is her eyes, the light and life in them as well as the mood and emotion from them is very cool. Some day I want to be able to do that! Speaking of.., how did you get the secondary catchlight in the bottom right of her eyes? Is it from a low reflector, or did you do it in PS? Anyhow, I really like it.

Travis

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Benji

Reply #4 - September 24, 2007, 03:52:27 PM

The lower catchlight was originally from a low reflector, but it was pretty weak, so I helped it along with some PS work.

Ben

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