The Traditional Family Portrait

Due to arthritis and just general stiffness seating grandparents on the ground for a more contemporary portrait is sometimes met with resistance as it was when I was setting up for this shot.  Add in the fact that it rained the evening before and I knew we would be seating everyone up off of the ground! The young man in the front middle is very important. He was carefully positioned to hide grandma and grandpa's rotund stomachs!

Benji
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Did you give grandpa a booster to stand on?

Nicely posed and lighted. Smiley How distressing it must be to have such a nice, clean group of people and then that knee! Tongue Why do people do that?

Are those prop stumps? If so, they really look real!

Great job! My only nitpick is the shine from grandpa's watch. Smiley
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Ben,

Very nice work.  The watch should be easy to tone down, but I didn't notice it until it was pointed out.  The posing of each individual is done very well indeed!

Seating someone in order to hide the body of others works very well.  However, I think that I woud have seated one of the shorter kids.  The head of the young man in the center is too high, and too close to grandma's, for my taste.

Ed
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While I thought the same thing Ed did about choosing a different person to sit in the middle look at their clothing...  The one with the most neutral shirt is posed in the center, which means he doesn't clash with grandma and grandpa.  The kid in the checkered shirt would have looked worse I think. 

I think Grandma and Grandpa standing is appropriate, the stumps are great, the overall pose is clean, well done and not too formal or too casual.

I didn't notice the watch until it was pointed out, but I see that it is a small issue now. 

My nitpicks - I would have asked the young man in the middle to relax a little and move his hand on the leg a few inches further toward his knee which may have lowered the front shoulder and caused a more relaxed lean, but then again, some people are stiff and you may have tried to fix it, I don't know, I wasn't there.
I would have also had the two girls standing put the thumbs of the front hands into their pockets to give a natural bend to the arms and added to the casual look - but that's personal preference, I am a pocket person.

Edited to add:  on my screen there is a blue-ish cast, but monitors and printers differ, so as long as it doesn't come back from your lab blue it won't be a problem.
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Ben they seem a bit spread out, is there a reason? or were they spaced based on the logs?
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Now . . . there you go . . . I love the spread to the pose.  In an open setting like this, there is no reason to push everyone together the way you might in a studio setting.

But, again, as always . . . that's just my view . . .

Ed
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Yeah, the spread thing is personal preference.  I tend to mash people together, I think part of that is because it sometimes hides bad posing, I know that is SOOOOO horrible.  But when people are spread out and posed very well there is nothing better, I think.
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I would have also had the two girls standing put the thumbs of the front hands into their pockets to give a natural bend to the arms and added to the casual look - but that's personal preference, I am a pocket person.

I would agree normally. But this time it would have caused their shirts to wrinkle and lay oddly. And at least one of them cant afford the bulk of that look.
I think the posing was right on! The color balance amoung the clothing is perfect, and I think middle seated guy is just that sort of stiff guy everywhere he goes. I think he was captured here. Just guessing.

my 2 cents.

Nice photo btw.

Corey
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Did you give grandpa a booster to stand on?

Nicely posed and lighted. Smiley How distressing it must be to have such a nice, clean group of people and then that knee! Tongue Why do people do that?

Are those prop stumps? If so, they really look real!

Great job! My only nitpick is the shine from grandpa's watch. Smiley

The stumps are real stumps, in fact a large tree fell about two weeks prior to this shot so I cut several off of it.  Actually they are only half stumps.  The trunk split in half when it hit the ground so with every cut I got two logs and they only weigh 1/2 as much!

Benji
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Benji, you are so resourceful, cool logs.
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Now guys I wasn't saying that them being spread out was bad. I would think to not have background showing between them. I know that's opinion, but was wondering if there was a specific reason for the spacing, something I hadn't thought of.
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