Reply #1 - October 13, 2008, 09:29:43 AM
Travis, I am a huge fan of butterfly lighting and it's about all I do. You know that. SO, take my advice, comments and critique with a grain of salt.
I think you did a good job here. It could have been more "glamour" with less fill. I find with a smaller light source you get light fall off on the sides of the face which has a slimming effect which can flatter most face shapes. I move my light closer to get a larger source and softer light on narrower faces that can handle it.
I think the image here could have benefitted from light fall off on the sides. I also think a dedicated hairlight would have added more drama to the image and more luscious shine to her dark hair. However, I can offer NO help on that as I am still struggling with hair lights myself.
I have also found that traditional lighting techniques sometimes cause shadows in creases on the face that I don't like at all, so I am glad someone else (especially someone I respect) pointed out that they notice that too. I feel better.
The interesting thing will be to see which she picks. That is always the ultimate test.

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