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Updating my website with some work completed this year . . .

October 13, 2007, 03:52:10 PM

As always . . . all comments are welcome!

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Ed Farmer
Mount Laurel, New Jersey

www.edfarmerphotography.com
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BobEdens

Reply #1 - October 14, 2007, 08:08:05 PM

Ed:
this is for your web site, right?

#1 loose it
its a good photo, not great and the girl is too big

#2
the girl is big but you did a great job making her look great. Good photo for your site.
You should keep this photo because it shows your skill in a subtle way.

#3
I like this photo, great shot of the dress. The pose and placement of the material makes her waist look thinker than it is. Since its for a bilboard (your site) you might try to replace it with a model sized bride.

Great shots all, but your site should NOT be about reality. [grin]

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Ed Farmer

Reply #2 - October 16, 2007, 08:10:56 PM

Bob,

Thanks for the comments . . . things are pretty slow around here and it is nice to get some feedback!

Although I don't really disagree with your comments on the first two shots, I think that I am going to keep both.

I do disagree on the third shot. If you look inside of her left elbow, you see light coming through between her arm and waist. This does not make her look thicker, but thinner.

I expect that I will put all three images onto my website. Understand that I am not talking about the first page, just part of a gallery of images.

I will add more in the next few days . . . I have been swamped here!

Ed

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Ed Farmer
Mount Laurel, New Jersey

www.edfarmerphotography.com
www.photoartsforum.com

BobEdens

Reply #3 - October 19, 2007, 07:03:13 PM

Point taken. not sure its a strong enough point to change my mind. The left side (her right) is GREAT the other side there is some light, but its for yor site so we're talking fairy tales right??

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