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Valerie Texture Overlay

Marian Murdoch
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October 12, 2008, 03:01:33 PM
Comments, critique on pose, texture, anything are welcome. Smiley
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Comments and Harsh Critiques gladly accepted. My photos are ok to edit.

My photos and art: http://wildmaven.org

BobEdens
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Reply #1 - October 12, 2008, 09:04:26 PM
Oooo Valerie has been "feeding"

I'm in Halloween mode, sorry.
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Ginnypenny
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Reply #2 - October 13, 2008, 09:06:40 AM
Really pretty picture.  It has an antique look to it.  I would crop a bit on the right side to give it a stronger composition, so she won't be as centered, there is no need for empty space on the right.
I also would have erased back her skin or at least taken some of the red out of the overlay there.  I love overlays but I am not a big fan of what they do on skin unless it looks like the paper the print is on is crinkled or something, but that's just opinion.
Overall the tones and pose are amazing.  Good job.
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corfolio23
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Reply #3 - October 17, 2008, 10:03:44 PM
I think you are really onto something with this image-texture combo.

It does seem out of balance somehow. Probably when you captured it, the properties that existed were balanced, but I think something needs to be different with this version.
Its top heavy. ..if that makes sense.
Aside from the balance issue, I think its lovely.
Youre super creative.

 Flash

Corey
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