Wait till you get a load of me

Playing around with shooting something noir this week for a short series. Does this fit the theme?

I like the black and white conversion, definitely one of those images that is great in black and white so much more so than color.

The hand not holding the gun is just hanging there, which would be fine but it's in front of her a little awkwardly. I would try something a different with it next time.

I like the crop.

ooh I like those two a lot.

good question, I should have expounded.
The first image you showed was fine, just not as sexy or interesting as I thought it had potential for. Her pose was weak because the one arm was just hanging there and her curves were obstructed. It did have a good theme, crop and b&w conversion going for it.

The second one is more interesting because her arm/hand is more engaged in the pose, it isn't just there.
The last one is very dynamic. The angle, the bend in her leg, and the placement of the gun are great. I think the story is stronger too, it looks like she may be hiding the gun behind her back, but in a casual way, she doesn't look tense or threatened. It's interesting.
I think the hint of looking up her skirt and is that skin we are seeing above the waist of her skirt? It ups the sexy factor. This is an image I would put in my portfolio on my boudoir site for sure.

3rd one's my favorite as well, for the same reasons Susie stated.

Continuing with the theme.

Girl with gun = sexy
Guy with gun = creepy

That's funny.